Showing posts with label House of Mystery. Show all posts
Showing posts with label House of Mystery. Show all posts

Saturday, June 19, 2021

June Round Robin Blog Fest

 


Welcome back to yet another fascinating installment of our blog fest!

At this time of year, I'm trying to spend weekends up at the lake away from technology--HA!!!--as if that ever works. But I'm happy to join in to answer this month's burning question:

In your writing how do you recognize and overcome plot problems or failures?

If you're a writer of any sort of genre, chances are  you've had a plot problem. Particularly for those of us who don't outline but let the story and characters take us where they want to go. Recognizing these "creative challenges" sometimes take the eye of a beta reader or an editor because writers can become so close to their work they don't read the actual words on the page but their brains substitute in the words that should be there. Which is why a lot of people have a tough time to self-edit.

This year, I'm training to become a Book Coach. Yup, that's a real thing! How cool, right? In my very first practicum, my client said that, since he's a pantser, he has a hard time remembering details and incidents from earlier chapters. That's one of the simplest ways for a plot problem to rear up.

I had a few suggestions for him:

  • Keep an open Word page so at the end of each chapter he can make the necessary notes about key characters and information for following chapters. In effect creating a step by step outline, but while he writes.
  • Sticky notes!! I love using sticky notes in the same way and used this method for All That Shines. Writing down my outline and putting those notes in book order on a posterboard on my wall enables you to see the whole book plotline by plotline. I can take it down if I need to, but the information I need for further chapters is laid out in such a way I can just look up and find what I need.
  • There's a great device we use in book coaching called the Inside Outline. Basically, making note of each scene then the point behind the scene. If there is no point to the scene, take it out if it doesn't drive the story forward.
Finding the plot issues is one thing. Fixing them...
Sometimes, like with one of my books that is back from a fresh edit, it takes a minor adjustment at the beginning of the book, to make the plot work. Because I had added a scene at the beginning of the book and didn't follow through to the rest of the book, the plot line had holes. Happily, all I have to do is soften the new scene to make it work.

Sometimes plot problems can be fixed during editing with just a few changes throughout the manuscript. Other times, the fix must be made much deeper to the story's structure.

Having some form of an outline can help you identify problems by seeing yours story structure whether it be with a synopsis, an outline, or sticky notes on a posterboard. I'd highly recommend using whichever way works best for you.


Watch for the pre-release of my newest novella Dead Without Remorse coming July 1st with a release date of August 1st! Gilda Wright is at it again! This novella takes us back in time to when the former Yoshida Martial Arts building is destroyed and a man found dead inside.

I got to do a fun radio interview for my new book All That Shines, you can listen here:  https://shows.acast.com/houseofmysteryradio/episodes/diane-bator-all-that-shines

Have fun seeing how our other amazing authors overcome their plot problems!

Marci Baun http://www.marcibaun.com/blog/

Skye Taylor http://www.skye-writer.com/blogging_by_the_sea

Connie Vines http://mizging.blogspot.com/

Diane Bator http://dbator.blogspot.ca/

Beverley Bateman http://beverleybateman.blogspot.ca/

Judith Copek http://lynx-sis.blogspot.com/

Dr. Bob Rich https://wp.me/p3Xihq-2lz

Rhobin L Courtright http://www.rhobincourtright.com

Monday, June 14, 2021

House of Mystery Radio Interview

 


The radio interview I did with House of Mystery airs next week !

The show airs at 9 P.M  Pacific Time KCAA 106.5 F.M. Los Angeles/ 102.3 F.M. Riverside/ 1050 A.M. Palm Springs and streaming online at stream.kcaastreaming.com:5222/kcaa.mp3
and 5 p.m.mountain times on 540 A.M. Salt Lake City and Streaming online KYAH – Utah's Talk Authority

After the show airs on the live radio stations, it goes up on the podcast. Usually at 10 p.m. pacific time that night! 
To find out all the radio stations and podcast platforms it'll be aired at  https://www.alanrwarren.com/hom-how-to-listen
All episodes will be placed on our website after the show airs as well at https://www.alanrwarren.com/hom-podcast-episodes
After the show airs, it'll be listed on our website under the appropriate categories at https://www.alanrwarren.com/hom-featured-guests  ( if you want to place in more categories or a different category than we have placed you, please let me know). It will stay up on our site for the year and throughout 2021! 
Your book or movie will be listed on our site at https://www.alanrwarren.com/  (bottom of page)
The episodes will also be placed on the KCAA website as well! 

MONDAY, June 14 - Peter Tatchell - Netflix Hating Peter Tatchell 
TUESDAY, June  15 - W.L. Hawkin - To Kill a King (e)
WEDNESDAY, June 16 -  Sebastien de Castell - Way of the Argosi (e)
THURSDAY, June 17 - V.S. Holmes - Heretics (e)
FRIDAY, June 18 - Diane Bator - All That Shines (e)

**Check here for the listings of upcoming shows!  Author & Radioshow Host | Alan R. Warren

Friday, May 7, 2021

Diane Bator's latest release All That Shines (Glitter Bay Mystery book 2)

 


Due to a sudden opening in the Escape With a Writer Schedule, I decided to fill it in myself and feature my Glitter Bay Mysteries! The questions are an amalgamation of answers to questions from a variety of interviews I've done over the past couple months. There are a couple of fun surprises if you keep reading to the bottom. I hope you enjoy!


What made you decide you wanted to write mysteries?


I’ve always loved to read them but never actually thought about writing them until I took part in a contest called Mystery in Ink put on by a small publisher in North Bay, Ontario. We had to use a murder mystery party game and write 10 chapters, each from the perspective of a different character. I loved it! And I won! My very first published book was that little novella called Murder on Manitou, which I plan to re-release one day soon. I was hooked!


Do you have a special place you like to write?


I used to love to write in a local coffee shop but I have written practically everywhere! Trying to write with three kids around, I learned to summon the muse wherever I stopped for a minute. Even while I was cooking dinner!


Where do the ideas for your books come from?


Anywhere and everywhere. I’ve had ideas come from dreams, from conversations, from seeing photographs or memes, you name it. My latest play idea hit me while I walked from my office ten feet down the hall to my livingroom. I had it outlined fifteen minutes later. It doesn’t always happen that fast, but when inspiration hits it can be like a runaway train!


What is the first book you remember reading?


I remember having lots of Little Golden books as a kid. Aside from every Hardy Boys or Nancy Drew mystery I could get my hands on, I read a Sidney Sheldon novel, I think it was The Other Side of Midnight, that I was totally absorbed in until the ending. Someone had torn out the last few pages and I was livid!!


If you were friends with a character in this book, what kinds of things would you do together?


Sage loves yoga as well as being active when she’s not working in her vintage boutique. Hanging out with her would involve some sort of outdoor activity. I’d love to walk on the beach and chat with her and ride the trails along the ocean that she’s likely discovered.

What does it mean to you to be called an author?

Even as I write more books, I always find it a thrill to think of myself as an author. For so long, I’ve only ever said “I write books.” With 11 novels published and a lot more social media presence, I’m starting to feel more like an author. That I actually know a little something about writing.

How do you define success as an author?

Deep down, a part of me won’t feel successful until I can write all day and quit my day job! The dream we all dream of! The other part of success is getting letters and reviews from readers who loved a character or a storyline and it made some sort of impact on them. 

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ALL THAT SHINES, Glitter Bay Mysteries, Book 2

Sage Miller is knee deep in fashion designers—whether she wants them in her new vintage boutique or not.

One winds up dead.

Another isn’t what he seems.

A third is treasure hunting.

Sage is stuck in the middle trying to solve a murder before the grand opening of Vintage Sage, which involves a fashion show she’d rather not be part of.

Excerpt:

“Sebastian helped to me get away from my ex.” Laken joined me. “Actually, not so much my ex as the paparazzi. Those guys are like wasps. They can hunt you down and swarm like heat-seeking missiles. I couldn’t have escaped Hollywood and settled here with you without his help.”

Only half convinced, I turned on the kettle.

Laken switched it off then opened the fridge. She handed me a well-chilled, half-full bottle of pinot grigio. “You’ll probably want this instead.”

“There’s more?” I gasped as I leaned against the cupboard. While my migraine would prefer the chamomile, my nerves won out. Pinot it was. I couldn’t take any more of Laken’s surprises without a little support.

My sister wasn’t stingy when she filled my glass. It seemed I was in for more revelations. Since she no longer drank alcohol, she filled her glass with sparkling water.

I took a large gulp before I dared to ask, “What’s going on?”

“We need to sit.” Laken half-dragged me back to the living room. She turned off her laptop before we sat in front of the fireplace. “I’m sorry I bought everything without showing you first.” She winced. “Sebastian is… Well, he’s…”

“He’s what?”

Laken chugged her sparkling water then sighed. “He’s part of the package.”

My eye twitched. I grasped my glass with both hands before I did something silly like drop it. “Who is Sebastian and what package is he a part of?”

“He’s a fashion designer who owns House of Hayward. That thirty thousand dollars includes his expertise to help set up Vintage Sage like a shop on Rodeo Drive.”

“Oh no.” I stared at her in the hope she would crack a smile or tell me she was joking. When neither came, I shook my head. “No, no, no, no, no. Send it all back. The cases, the dummies, the snooty designer…especially the snooty designer. We don’t need this, Laken. I’ve done perfectly well without Hollywood intruding.”

 


 

ALL THAT SPARKLES, Glitter Bay Mysteries Book 1

What do a trunk full of vintage clothes, a handsome land developer, and a fifty year old diamond heist have in common?

Laken Miller receives a trunk full of expensive vintage clothing and a stack of newspaper clippings about a fifty-year old diamond heist. Now all she has to do is figure out who murdered Tilly San Vicente before the killer silences her as well.

Buy links:

BWLPublishing 

Amazon 

AND ONE MORE THING!!!

To hear more I dropped by the House of Mystery not too long ago and made it Shine!

CHEERS!!

Diane

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